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When you weep
I can't sleep
When you cry
I feel myself die
When you shed a tear
It is the worse I fear
When you are sad
I feel real bad
But when you are in my arms
I hold you tight to keep you warm
And to keep you closer to me
Sleeping happily
In my arms, you feel secure
And u feel that our love is pure
I promise upon my heart which beats with every breath you take
That my love for you isn't fake
When my eyes get lost in yours
I know that life's worth living for
I see in your eyes
A fire that never dies
That is our eternal flame
It was sparked when into my life, you came
©2004-2009 ~Lphybridb7
:iconlphybridb7:

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love poem for once, quite an olde one(dun like it too much)

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:iconyoyogrl2:
Omgosh... I have tears in my eyes. I love this poem. It's beautiful. :cries:

Maybe the reasoni have tears in my eyes is because im in a sad mood, but that doesnt matter.

It's a great poem and I'm off to look at some more of your work.

Feel free to look at my poems if you'd like. :D :D

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And it hurts to want everything and nothing at the same time
I want whats yours and I want whats mine
I want you
But I'm not giving in this time

Give Kim more hugs
:iconlphybridb7:
lol, thx alot for the comment.

aww...dun cry just a poem :P

you should be happy for somthing:)

thx again for the comment, i'll be sure to check out ur poems when i get the chance ^.^

c'ya around
:iconalone-kioko:
thats so nice...^.^ really deep and sincere,great job. :clap:

--
On a large enough time line, the survival rate for everyone will drop to zero.
:iconyoyogrl2:
Aw I'm fine :)

Thanks :) means a lot.

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And it hurts to want everything and nothing at the same time
I want whats yours and I want whats mine
I want you
But I'm not giving in this time

Give Kim more hugs
:iconlphybridb7:
lol, thx for the comment and thx for addin it to ur favorites :D

peace
:iconamusanteart:
aww thats good! any girl would love to recieve that. good work as always! btw check out some of my stuff and tell me what u think. Peace!!
:iconyoyogrl2:
:D :D

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And it hurts to want everything and nothing at the same time
I want whats yours and I want whats mine
I want you
But I'm not giving in this time

Give Kim more hugs
:iconxpainxsilencedx:
wow...that poem brought back memories...good job.

--
afalling in love. it's a beautiful lifechanging event.

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